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Your Destiny!

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Destiny your need to grasp!
Within your heart its power,
To swim within its making,
Within each day,
Within each hour,

To sacrifice yourself to fate,
To take the leap of fear,
To cast yourself within its dark,
To see your purpose clear.

Eternity your life to play,
And all your heart to beat,
Your purpose spins within a day,
Until its path complete.

To travel in its greatness,
The question always why?
But the question goes unanswered,
Under vast eternal skies,

We are here this earth a moment,
We live and love, and feed,
But to know the way your destiny?
Its path your heart will lead.

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  • LadCoberst
    May 10, 2008

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    Noo! When I saw the picture, I thought "Shades of destiny", and here you are with a destiny poem to the picture But I'll write it anyway, hehe.

    A really, really nice write by the way!

    Cheers, Lad

  • bobby3332321
    May 10, 2008

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    wow

    Hey I entered this contest to and I realy want to win but man oh man I got to say you deserve it this poem was awsome


  • Zoe2007
    April 27, 2008
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    Good poem . I like the style and lauguage very nice