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its ovr

to bad i believed
all tha lies u fed me
how u cared
how u loved me
im glad i saw
now im lost
but not 4 long
cuz i am strong
now i dont need u
my world has crumbled
ill come out from
unda tha rubble
i LOVED you
now its all ova

no question

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  • ksenia juggalette
    May 18, 2008

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    wow!!!

    this is really good i no how it feels but u will get out of the despair it dosnt last 4ever! its hurts like abiatch but ure strong!


  • z etoile
    May 17, 2008
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    Awesome... job!


  • RainbowEyes
    May 15, 2008
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    Sad, but with attitude. I love this one.


  • Lonely Christina
    May 12, 2008
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    saddddd so sad. but very good


  • inhisimage
    May 9, 2008
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    i like this poem it is very unique it a great way

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