It hurts
Not to see
Your deep brown eyes
It kills
To miss a day
When your presence warms
My chilled heart
It burns
Not to hear
Your whispered love melodies
After all I had to face
All the lies that hid
Somehow I can’t forget you
Having to live
Without you
Is like a body without its soul
But my life goes on
Believing that it’ll all
Get better soon
Scars will heal
When the time is right
And I’ll just wait,
Smiling
Coz I deserve to
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
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900 points, ended May 12, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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But my life goes on
Believing that it’ll all
Get better soon
Scars will heal
When the time is right
we have to believe it'll get better...or we'll dwell, and those scars will never heal.
we all deserve to smile =) -
I love the strength of this piece. There is so much here that I am glad about- I love the powerful voice you carry throughout, your never-ending faith that holds to the very last word and the loveliness of it all.
Scars will heal
When the time is right
And I’ll just wait,
Smiling
Coz I deserve to
I am sure that life will be awesome honey! and I cant wait for that day too 
&& I simply love the last stanza! Not many people can say that; they just dont have the guts or the courage to. && I love that you have the inner voice and courage to write those lines and believe them!
lovely write dear. && I think I know who you are
very best of luck to you dearie
--char--
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this (:
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