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I'll Miss You

The days are getting closer,
Soon you'll be leaving,
So many times I've tried to tell you,
But the words get lost in my throat,
I miss you,
I will miss you,
More than you will ever know,
I will worry about you every night,
Wondering if I'm going to get an email,
Saying you're dead, or hurt,
My greatest fear, Coming true,

You, Leaving,
I can't help but cry at the idea now,
How hard is it going to be in 2 months,
When you're
Gone...
The thought I can hardly stomach,
I'll be truely,
Ostracizied,
No one, I can turn to,
When I need to talk,
I'll be alone,

The sun in my life gone,
Just like before,
I shudder at the thought,
The only one who never hurt me,
Gone,
For 5 years,
But I can promise you,
I won't forget in the 5 years,
I'll miss you with every beat of my heart,
And I'll be counting the days until you're home,
Because I love you,
I need you in my life,
I want you in my life,
Cause,
You're all I ever wanted,
And You're all I'll ever need.
And I'll never stop loving you♥

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To Daniel Carrasquillo♥, I've spoken the truths.

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  • Hmmm

    not bad but i may have to start editing ur writes agian. i miss doing it, well lil more catchiness wouldn't hurt. well later love...


  • Crazy-Dan
    October 10, 2008
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    I have never commented this one and reading it almost a year after it was writen was like looking into the past. And it made me cry a bit.

    And I have one big statement to make
    I still love you even though 6 months of those 5 years have come and gone
    And those 5 years might turn into 9 months, please respond to me, ask me about it
    Please start talking to me again, i don't know why u stopped


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 27, 2008

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    No one can stop the loving..this is an endless journey..I do agree with you..this is indeed a heartfelt write ..wonderful immagery and the sentiments as well..well done....