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nothing anymore

betrayed by my thoughts
murdered by my emotions
nothing is right
not anymore

I can feel the tension
creeping up my spine
taking it's sweet bite
from what used to be my life

I only want...
I don't even know anymore
how can I
it has become a mystery to me

what, you may ask, is it
it is all that represents
who
and why I am

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  • Cat10
    April 27, 2008
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    once again, great job!