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[ If you watch the new ]

If you watch the new
they are telling you gas
is going up
That Kids are
Getting Shot
Pollution is Making
the little baby's choke
That people under the age
and getting caught
What is the world
coming to?
A Complete stop
A Complete roll
I dunno But know i see
what my mother and father
taught to me
No matter that i am very young
I understand the People
and what they are to become
The World is not here
to be destroyed
its here to help us survive
No matter how something may seem
all we must do is try and dream
Dream of a Society with violence
A society with no dead people in a trunk
A society were kids a drunk
A Society were we can live like we want

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    Yep I don't think many people would disagree on this one.Let us hope that with hard work these dreams will one day become a reality.
    Thank you so much for your excellent entry.
    Gaylene