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Lost Words


with you-

my heart
had wings

Heaven

was never,
…very far away



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  • Frozentearz
    April 28, 2008

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    ooooh you have spoken in such few words and left the overwhelming feeling of how love can be in realtime
    or thinking back.
    Bravo to you Bravo to you.
    Frozentearz


  • violet nights...
    April 27, 2008

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    So beautiful. Sometimes words clutter meanings. However, You showed you can make clear and beautiful statements simply. That is a gift!


  • Perception
    April 26, 2008

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    Oh. wow... With such few words... You... just.. said so much. This is beautiful.