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Holding back my tears

I try to tell you what i think
You say go away not now
i cry
Im holding back my tears

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  • DawnKestrel
    May 5, 2008

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    Cool.
    Though I don't get why you said 'i cry' and then 'Im holding back my tears'. You can't do both things at once. Other than that, very good!