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Pain and Passion

There is a passion
we all ignore
Its Mother is Torture
And its father is War

Water dripping
Electrodes nipping
Smiling faces
Toenail clipping

O the pain
please help me
No One hears
No one cares

For in hidden places
In cells sad faces
any deed can be done
And is

Sadists laughter
Any method
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For all is fair...In the love of War

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    Excellent! In the name of war it seems that torture is welcomed. So sad.Any other time there is pure outrage.
    Thanks so much for your thoughst here.
    Gaylene