You waited,
for some return
of feeling…
Too frightened,
I lost the right
to love you…
on your wedding day.
Author notes
I'd have liked to make this longer but I think it turned out alright. Haha, well it's pretty obvious but if you couldn't tell it's about an infatuation ending with him marrying another girl before enough nerve was built up to admit there were feelings for him. No point of dwelling on what's lost though I suppose... haha, I procrastinate much too often... perhaps I thought he'd always be there... a silly notion really...
A contest entry
- Lost Love Letters by Ephiphany.
450 points, ended April 30, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sadnesses =/ anyways nice!!!
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Haha, yes well life can be like that sometimes I suppose. ^_^ I'm pleased you liked it.
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No this is just the right length IMHO. He waited. You hesitated. You lost him. It happens all too often that quickly.
Erik
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