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Kindred Spirits

She is a woman
with a full heart, artfully cocooning
somewhere in an illusioned room
with herself, beside herself, looking
with eyes of love
in solitude, among the multitude

I hear her voice
whispering warnings, half-formed,
bodiless as vapor. Pens to be freed,
to be heard, showing self in
shapes of swans, shedding light on
darkness with wings of hope

She wants a measure
of quietude, a certain silence,
The echo of alone
which silences the screaming,
the nothing that stills the wanting,
the numb, to hide the hurt

I see a woman, proud,
uncompromising, diaphanous as air
less the tears that fall  
about her weary feet
Salty solutions; bane for thirst,
pooled upon her hallowed ground

She feels too much,
too deeply to be directionless,
too real for imagining, and yet
her harrowing eyes hold heartache
and her own reflection;
a melding of shadows misting mirror

I'm persuaded that time
has no puissance but that which
she affords it...
but she waits transfixed, believing
heavenly sleep is for the dead,
as its ghosts still haunt her living

She worries about
being alone, that in her longing
she has been forsaken, mistaken

I cry for having
too much sorrow, for fear of her
falling, and when by the pouring of
her soul she lies; a vessel emptied
I cry again for what she has lost,
and still rejoice for what she gains

She touches the downy wings
of hope and wonder. Replenishing
reverence, need, and hunger,
while touching us all...


We are formed by life experiences;

shaped, broken, perhaps
- unmade and voided -
but always, the core remains waiting

with faith, with trust, with
hope eternal ...truly kindred spirits








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  • You write the spirit of this woman, so endearingly, so truthfully..I can see why it would bring her to tears for I have them here, while reading this. Such softness, such romance in this...Captured on a bed,
    woven with veil of words,
    she would hear the sigh
    even in the silence of love
    still it speaks... Love, C


  • MysticalRayne gold member
    April 30

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    This is fantastic I love the depth you have brought to this write ~ best of luck


  • Robin Candor
    April 27

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    You did a remarkable job with this. I'm impressed with how you were able to weave such a lengthy afgan and not lose direction but stay right on point. I would think you should fair well in this contest and I would not want to be one competing against this write. The romantic and introspective seem to be comfortable within your pen. RC


  • KayJay46 gold member
    April 27
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    Hauntingly beautiful with a soulfulness that touches each of us... Well done!
    Ken


  • paw-writer silver member
    April 27

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    Wow!

    This write is amazingly beautiful. "but she waits transfixed, believing
    heavenly sleep is for the dead,
    as its ghosts still haunt her living" I especially love this line and the last stanza. Very touching poem! Patty

    . Rewarded 4


  • ShelleyA gold member
    April 27

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    A beautiful heartfelt write. Very good imagery, flow and tone. Vivid descriptives. Deep expression of emotion. Very nice metaphor. Elegant verse tinged with sadness. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 27

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    "She wants a measure
    of quietude, a certain silence,
    The echo of alone
    which silences the screaming,
    the nothing that stills the wanting,
    the numb, to hide the hurt"

    No fair, makin' the judge get all teary~eyed, Nicky. Thank you for entering such a genuine, understanding piece, my Friend. It's beautiful...& certain parts of it, all too true. Good luck in the contest, Poet. Wanda

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