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God's Favorite Angel

God sent the world his favorite angel
and her parents named her Chloe.
But God didn't realize that without her sweet soul
how sad and lonely heaven would be.

Each second without her presence
to God was an eternity.
Even though he knew she was
a tremendous blessing to her family.

God cried without her,
oh what hell heaven could be.
And all the angels of heaven
were aware of God's extreme misery.

So when he could no longer stand it
he called his favorite angel home.
And all of heaven is rejoicing as God smiles
as he looks down from his throne.

For there at his feet is his favorite angel Chloe.
Now he know's she is truly heaven's HEART AND SOUL
and just her presence makes him so very happy.
God's only regret is that he ever let her go.

But not all of heaven rejoices
for Jesus felt the families pain.
He took on the worlds sins, miseries and sorrows.
For his sacrifice  he has scars that still remain.

Knowing they had been plunged into the well of sorrow
driven to it's very deepest depth.
For Chloe's Family and friends
Jesus wept.

But Jesus also knows that one day they will walk
the streets of heaven and what a blessing it will be.
For they will once again all be reunited
with God's favorite angel Chloe.

Author notes

An AP poet on this site lost her granddaughter and was seeking other poets to write how they were touched by this and I just wanted to hopefully bring them any comfort I possibly could. I know I would be totally destroyed if I where in her situation and could only think to try and answer the question everyone asks when a small child or young person dies. WHY WOULD GOD TAKE THEM. So these are my possible thoughts at an answer. and hopes that it in even the smallest way brings comfort to a another hurting poets soul

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  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 30

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    Deeply touching and poignant piece
    I can't even begin to fathom what it would be like to lose a child...
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with me; be blessed, poet!


  • Snakehips Pete
    September 23, 2008

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    This was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sweet I had to have emergency dental surgery on my left bottom molar as it just plain rotted through.


  • Misty Melody gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest sorry it took so long to comment. I have been dealing with a lot. Your poem brings a little peace to me. Wonderful poem Thanks, Melody


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    This is such a sweet poem. I do not believe I will go to heaven but that is me. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.

  • magneticblue
    July 17, 2008

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    A beautiful poem. I hope that it comforted the woman and her family for whom it was made. God is our comfort and strength, a very important aspect of knowing who he is is knowing you can rely on him in times of trouble. Thank you for entering.


  • FlaviusArrianus
    July 8, 2008
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    Thank you for entering. <3


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 6, 2008

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    Great i think this was really good the way it describes how god felt. Its was just truely a very good piece. Thanks for entering my contest iwish you the best of luck. ..<3.. Shelly


  • Hectic Michelle
    June 1, 2008
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    Oh, you will not be able to place in this contest if you do not read the instructions on my contest and add my requests in the Author's Notes.

  • Hectic Michelle
    June 1, 2008

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    Awww! I felt this one all the way down to my toes! Thank you so much for putting this into my contest! I hope that you do well!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    This is indeed a heartfelt and a verse bringing the spirtual peace to the effected ones..you are bringing the air of solace here with so much peaceful poetry..well done...


  • Charles Johnson
    May 30, 2008
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    I recently wrote this for a AP friend who lost her granddaughter and I hope it also helps you with the lose of your sister nicole. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family with this lose. may god bless you!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    This is such a gentle and loving piece. It touches the very center of my heart. It made me cry, but through my tears was also a smile. I can't thank you enough for this wonderful entry about Chloe.

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