seed into a tree
into the grainy finish
of a rocking chair
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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...a nice reflection on the passing of time!
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Oh, cool! I like haiku, just can't write them but you sure can!
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great haiku, all of life
tanka:
fire burns down as chair rocks slow
turning back into a seed -
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Great one. Thanks.
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only to be wasted by
the foolishness of mankind
Not sure if this really fits. Great haiku, good luck ^.^
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Suitable two. Thank you.
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now it sits there unaware
because alzheimer's set in
my add on is silly i can't think Good luck
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Good one. Thanks.
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well this brings to me some insight and I vision it so...
sawcut wood- with his skilled hands
the old tree ...rocks grandmother
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Very nice--both the haiku and the tanka response.
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Mighty fine rejoinder.
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