It gathers 'neath my nails
while scratching my better half
as if it was my scalp and I wondered:
'Damn, what was I thinking?'
Her head reels after she takes a whiff.
'Fuck!' She frowns, 'What is that?'
Glaring at the brown, I say,
'The end result of having you
for dessert tonight.
One way or another,
every meal has to come out, right?'
She storms away in a huff
early enough for me to sleep in peace.
Love stinks, doesn't it?
Author notes
I'm trying to think of a love poem but I keep coming up blank. Jeez...
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Haa,haa,haa!! You are an absolute mess. So is this poem but, I like it. I love reading the natural stuff. Poetry ain't always blue violets and red roses is it? And love will stink.
You couldn't have been my better half cause I would have came right back atcha babe.LOL! This was truly good. -
Lol, reality at the very tips of your fingers, and she refuses to acknowledge that there might be several grains of truth to it,...I love it,
~~~Artis
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When I was a kid my parents would constantly say "That's dung, this is dung"... I had no idea what "dung" meant. I later found out when we were teens, and they replaced "dung" with "shit". I also read dung hill in the Bible.
Ah-hem... I don't blame her for walking away "in a huff". I actually pass gas every single morning. Ray is always the first one up but that was not the fact when we were first married. LOL He learns fast!
It's because I sleep with my mouth open, and air gets into my stomach during the night.
Umm...enough about me. You are a mess! (pun intended)
I LOVE YOU Dez!
Renee
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This could be romantic in a strange sort of way. No, maybe not. Your better half didn't think so. Worse than farting in bed.
I suppose if you live someone, you should love every part of them!
A daring write.
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This proves you'll do ANYTHING to get a good night's sleep! I've heard the phrase 'love stinks' before ... but this takes it to a whole new level! LOL
Only you buddy ... only you
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LOL, thank you. Well, at least I stopped writing about drinkng! One.
Dez
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Some moments say so much, revealing the inner notions, the deeper thoughts, profound revelations... or just that love hurts sometimes... memorable write here...PK
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excellent, this is poem has a strong aroma that lingers long after the last line... Very enjoyable poem, thanks for sharing this romantic moment.
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LOL... well that certainly is a twist on the love poem!
Very creative indeed
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Wow.....anyway you gave a very vivid imagery and told a intriguing story that kept the reader interested without totally giving it away at the beginning (even though the title is self explanitory). Thanks for reading my poem. Keep Writing.
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l.o.l.!
This is so funny! the visual you created is priceless! thanks for your 'love poem ( ) I love it!
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