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As Butterflies Dance

Dancing with charmed wings as butterflies do,
the beat within my heart speaks love to you.
Golden days spent fluttering through your veins,
pollenates blooms after winter's sweet rain.

Sculpting moonbeams with radiant smiles,
our soul's laughter is now heard for miles.
Delving into foliage as it grows,
we travel together with truth to show.

Glittered stars shine as our eyes meet again,
bringing light to our path... Isn't it grand?
Hues, once hidden in darkness, show their face,
coloring skies with rainbows to be chased.

Inhaling sweetness as you near my soul,
loving you is my eternity's goal.


© Viyanna Rosemarie Langager
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i used the photo on the contest page as inspiration for this poem. it was so beautiful i could not resist.

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  • Topnotchsy
    June 18, 2008

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    This is really beautiful. Love how you ran with the idea of the butterfly, such a beautiful, graceful animal. The rhyming and rhythm was also really good.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    May 10, 2008
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    This is very lovely, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    Such a darling interpretation of this contest picture- liked the rhythm, rhyme and flow in the lines.