Sunshine beats upon my skin
Summer days are here again
Scent of blooms in the air
Reddening of my skin so fair
As we walked upon the sand,
gently; lovingly you took my hand
The oceans' roar, it seemed so calm
Our love was singing like a psalm
Didn't care my skin was burning,
for your kisses I was yearning
As your lips met with mine,
our hearts and souls did entwine
That summer day you stole my heart
Please God, let us never part
Author notes
I fell in love on the beach
by crahttp://www.lifeplusvitamins.com/hawaii-beach-oil.html.
A contest entry
- Lift my Spirits by aboomer.
525 points, ended May 6, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1705 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Summer Time by FloridaGatorQueen.
420 points, ended June 7, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
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500 points, ended June 15, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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nothing like summer love. this was beautiful, capturing one's feelings well
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Great i love the words you used.Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
..<3..
Shelly -
I will just say this is very Beautiful nothing like falling in love on the beach.The Poem was great the flow was so smoothe.
Thank you for the entry and good luck in the contest -
ohhhhh summer love and all the romance.
nice write
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This is such a sweet poem. Never fell in love with anybody on the beach. Now from reading this I know what it is like. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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It was ever amazing! Great descriptions! Thanks for entering!!
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Very sweet and good flow. Best to you in the contest.
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AWESOME!
Nice job on this work Jennifer. It spells summer all over. I liked the visual effort in this. GOOD JOB!
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this is very beautiful and romantic, thank you for entering!
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The rhyming is excellent but the flow varies from couplet to couplet and is not always perfect within each couplet. Great writing but this is a tough contest!
Look forward to reading your entries in the later rounds, your poetry is always a pleasure.
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Very nice flow and rhythm. I love love so the theme is heavenly to me. I definitely enjoyed reading this poem. In the summertime when the blooms are all love inspired....
~ Joyce
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This carried me along on a pleasant and easy current. GREAT flow and perfect word choice. Not to mention the impeccable emotion. Love on the beach, no longer so cliche.
best of luck and thanks for entering!
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aaaw...this is really sweet. a lot of love poetry is really cliched...this isn't, and thus is good.
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trophy a head
I like you entered this too
now you like me will wait and see...
rudolf
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humans connecting at the souls
great write .. smooth rythm.. excelent images in this write.. all the clappies i can slappies
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Romantic and full of love, nice rhyme, lovely wording and images.
thank you for your entry
best wishes
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a good poem, ah the heat of fired moments, with the sun and the passion within the heart and soul, sandy life.
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Wonderfully done, you stole my title though!!! Nicely flowing and good rhyme throughout. best of luck...Scott
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This is wonderful, I love the voice and tone of this poem, very lighthearted and warm. This is a beautiful tribute to your love.
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Ahhh the warmth of love and the beach combined.. sure makes for a lovely feeling!! A lot of passion in those lines... how wonderful to fall in love on the beach!
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