laughing at a decapitation on the television screen
wondering if my therapist wonders why....
desensitization is the metropolis, islands in the sky
wishing well, living hell, beauty tokens in a spell
is it really creepy or do you just hate that you don't know?
destructive egotism expressed, instant message communication and drunken nights
poor history of the future, fear not, i will exploit all i can and He remembers what and how
today exploit sounds better than it should beCause we carry fire
and he's so sick of all the players, cheaters and motherfucking liars..
so why'd he lie?
the tragedy of thinking to much, destructive egotism expressed, inconsequential, unproductive, ineffective..
bright side. it's an age of solid connotation-al shifts.
seems like everybody's going green, even to a small degree
with vain talk of revolution and the exceptionally unseen.
lucky, yes lucky bitches, to have seen what i have seen.
sometimes, still, we're pretty mean, even though we know how it feels.
do you ever wonder why?
and as usual, to hopefully be continued...
Author notes
this was first inspired by a conversation i had with a friend about her and another having a good laugh over the decapitation scene in 30 days of night, they were with our therapy group leader.
what do YOU think?
Comments
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I hear sarcasm and pain, but I think you let a lot anger out on this. Very beautiful though
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Great
I like this poem. I relate to it so well. I always wonder why people do crazy stuff or laugh at nutty things,lol. You really did a great job. :]
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i 'dig' this. haha
but i thought you said a lot but then you almost pounded it in too much. like for instance:
the part where you're taking about
"today exploit sounds better than it should beCause we carry fire
and he's so sick of all the players, cheaters and motherfucking liars.."
you said such a shitful of meaning!!! i love this verse but then you said 'why'd he lie?' or something like that, dude i got that before you fucking said it, for real! when you do that you're writing for some dumb motherfucker with a name like XxvampirewolflverxX and i'm sure you would never want to do something as disgusting like that.
overall i fucking love this write.
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