A beauty to rival all others
urges my complete devotion
reserving my deepest affections
only for her soft full benefit
resurfacing sprint from exile
and refreshing total existence
Centered upon our united heart
entirely are love's thoughts
repeating in chambers of infinity
expounding endlessly true bliss
so that sweetest heaven is attained
Author notes
Pic is of my Ashley.
A contest entry
- Your favorite picture inspired pt 2 by whispernthedark.
625 points, ended May 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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She is very beautiful, and your gorgeous words a perfect tribute to your love. This is so sweet, I have an acrostic for my husband & me, and it's my all time favorite... there's nothing like that love you pour into it. Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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what could I possibly say to this one?!
She seems to have stolen every second beat of your heart
well done my friend
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Aww bless! You guys are so sweet. How wonderful to have such a love in your life.
Gorgeous acrostic
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