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Angel Shapes.

Let's lie in fields of yellow flowers,
Mould the clouds and count the stars.
Get lost in everglades of velvet green,
and kiss in places unperceived.
When dusk appears and drapes across the sky we'll sleep.
Two lovers leaving angel shapes.


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  • just mercedes gold member
    October 25, 2008
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    Great Imagery

    somehow calm and lovely, a very nice read.


  • HugsForEveryone
    June 14, 2008

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    Wow... This is just so... Descriptive! It left me feeling calm and happy. I loved the last line. Very nice job, one of my favorites on this site! Definitely bookmarking. Sounds like there's a great love in place.
    ♥♥♥♥♥
    ~Pandy


  • maralisa silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    Get lost in everglades of velvet green,
    and kiss in places unperceived.
    When dusk appears and drapes across the sky we'll sleep.
    Two lovers leaving angel shapes.wonderful poem thank you for sharing your poem with the group


  • Restless and True
    May 3, 2008
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    That was so sweet

    and beautiful

    I loved it!

    Amazing write.

    ~Restless and True~