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Unsaid

darning needle
stitch lip

creaking unaware
she rocks

twice past
he'd left the letters blank

and tired eyes
trained on the
tunnel vision's light

were blinded
black and blue

dead sockets

of a wrinkled
skin receptacle

that whithered into dust

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  • Entwining Beauty
    April 26, 2008
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    Outstanding write good luck


  • Blooming Poet
    April 26, 2008

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    wow, this is intense and full of emotion. You said a lot with only a few words. Thanks for entering. Loved it.