Spring brings warmth to day
Stars at night’s end fade away
Lovers enjoy each other
© Jonathan Wikkins April 26, 2008
All Rights Reserved
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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comforting
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Nicely done but. Haiku's have 5-7-5 in traditional form or no more than 17 in non traditional. you have here 5-7-7 . Ummm will be back for tanka response gotta leave right now lol. The background is cool looks like one of my friends lol Good luck in the contest
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very nice, a spring morning haiku
tanka:
life renews in lover's touch
waking from the winter dark -
Nicely penned
I love the feelings the depth of emotions that reap
Paints a wonderful image in my mind
Julie
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I have just been learning about Haiku form and you have really shown the form at its best. Good luck with this one.
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thanks jem, suddenly i've really started writing shorter and shorter pieces...
before now i thought i was too long winded to write 15 word, 5 line, haiku, etc...
but, suddenly...
thanks for the read!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins
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