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Refrain

Love begets
  forgiveness begets
  empathy begets
    sympathy begets
    unity begets
      joy begets
      peace begets
Love begets
  forgiveness begets
  empathy begets
    sympathy begets
    unity begets
      joy begets
      peace begets...

(refrain)

Author notes

Just sitting around this afternoon and began playing around with words. This is one thing that came out.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    May 25, 2008

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    If only this were the song of the world...instead of the one that is being sung right now.

    Az

  • Eric Nunnally
    May 24, 2008
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    always in the pocket.


  • Providence
    April 27, 2008
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    The power of words at their finest.

    Bravo!
    marianne


  • suseann
    April 26, 2008

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    How simply yet profoundly true this repetive verse is! All virtues do indeed result in or as you've said here"begets"love. That most precious commodity we all exist for in giving and accepting it. Nice depth of thoughts evolve in this well crafted if compacted verse.


    • Watuwant silver member
      April 27, 2008
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      Thank you, suseann. I had hoped that this would come across as it did to you.
      Your thoughts and commentaries are always appreciated.
      peace
      doug

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