The little devil of your creation
Is vindictively seeking retaliation
It's not just a moment of aberration
It's the result of years of desperation
It's the only logical ramification
Of the never-ending humiliation
Of the betrayal that smothered my dedication
Now I see it, you can't hide your trepidation
Your fear of the awaiting excruciation
I'm sorry I couldn't resist the temptation
To see on your face that look of frustration
I bet it exceeded your expectation
But you've always been my inspiration
And then again, I'm just a devil of your creation!
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Beautiful rhyme scheme and rhythm... you've set up a marvelous piece. It's absolutely amazing.
Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
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amazing write, i loved the descrition and the idea, simply beautiful
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Very nice done
I loved it! flow and rhyming!!
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Wow, a very good write.
"To see on your face that look of frustration
I bet it exceeded your expectation
But you've always been my inspiration
And then again, I'm just a devil of your creation!"
That is brilliant!
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Wow. This poem screams off the page and frightens me alittle with it's strength, metaphors and imagery.
The use of large words helps bring this to it's rightful peak in the poetry sense.
Excellent write
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