Looking
into your eyes
I see forever,
I see us
on a neverending beach
with
beautiful
blue waters.
NO
WORRIES
Author notes
For T>R>B>O>L
A contest entry
- Lost Love Letters by Ephiphany.
450 points, ended April 30, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow that was simple yet very beautiful and touching! Excllent job!
Lauren
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very classy heart you have here mr i think you even made me smile well you did with this piece here you are a heart rober
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This is very romantic and relaxing!
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in your eyes i see forerver...ahh so sweet...true as eyes are the window of our heart...
success in your contest
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Ahhh, wish I was there! Such a tender heartfelt piece, full of emotions. Beautifully penned hunni, good luck in your contest
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Dearest Brother Boo,
Heartfelt words winning my heart over and over again. Best wishes for the contest, I miss you.
Hugs and love,
Petratanii xo
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oh yes! this water makes me think about love relaxation and honduras baby oh my i love this good luck to you in the contest babe
great 20 word knock out
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Nice vision Julia. BYE
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AHH. This is so sweet. Love can bring out the best and worst in people, it brought out the best in yoou and your poetry.
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Thank you very much! I see your name come up often, I'll come and visit when I get a chance.
"BOO"
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