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Disappeared

You disappeared
I never saw you again
to tell you
you were
all I ever
needed or wanted
in life

A contest entry

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  • Ephiphany
    April 28, 2008
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    Lovely entry you have here...
    thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    April 26, 2008

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    this was nice twenty words of confession here. you added some teary eye emotions in this good luck


  • Riftkin gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    The lost love is felt here.
    I can feel that.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Riftkin