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Fragile As I am

Take me as I am,
As fragile as I may seem.
Take me as I am,
This may just turn into a dream.
Take me as I am,
No other emotion's so true.
Take me as I am,
I'll never run away from you.

Author notes

a poem about love? *gasp*

I'm happy by the way!

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  • XxPan3xX
    June 21, 2008
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    This sounds a bit like a song.
    It is very peaceful and sweet.
    I love it!
    Good job!!!


  • Lonely Christina
    May 22, 2008
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    this is sweet. love it and good job on it.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    April 26, 2008
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    beautiful sweety
    congrats
    love you

  • AliceInTheRealWorld
    April 26, 2008

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    I love the last two lines, they ring special. I feel you should make it longer, but if it feels right to you so mote it. I miss you,