I come to you to help me out
Because I feel I don't know what life is about
We start to talk and you really don't listen to me
There are things I need you to help me see
Then you rush me out the door
But before I leave I try once more
Things I never had a chance to say
I tried once again to tell you today
I wonder does God really exist
I want to know why things happen like this
I need to know can God love me too
I don't know what to believe Because of how I feel about you
Author notes
Prompt:
Things I Never Had A Chance To Say
In a list
A contest entry
- ENTER HERE(QUICKIE) by Blooming Poet.
380 points, ended April 26, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Congrats on the well deserved Silver!! I think we all have that kind of questioning in our life at some time.. and a wish we'd said things we never did!
Excellent
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awwwwww.... hugs sis, i feel just like that... i admit I can asimilate eith the last paragraph... i feel like that too... many things happen to those who only search for one thing.. while the ones who sarch for what cannot be given are mostly paid in gratitude *sighs* life tends to suck... but at moments is the best thing to have... great write and good luck!
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Wow Sis...this is fantastic, the questions everyone asks at some stage of theier lives...
I love poems like this they always make you stop and think about life, and other peoples lives.
Simon
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This poem is full of wondering about life and love and full of questions, most honestly you may never find te answer to until you find God at the pearly gates.
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Aww. sister this was really good!! you did such a great job with the prompt!! I really liked it!! bravo! you really expressed yourself very well..
Best of luck sister!
Jetleena
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Excellent penned poem, A lot of un answered question does god really exist. That depends on what your heart says. I believe he did but nobody can go on forever, It in our hearts to life life and become stronger if we face problems on or travels. Fantastic poem good luck
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