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I Gave It All to You

I've given it all to you.
You, you threw it all away.
I'm sorry, I was just so
afraid.

I was going through
hell, and I didn't want
to drag you through
it too. I wanted you
to be happy, I didn't
want you to go through
this!

I'm so sorry. I gave you
my whole heart, and you shattered
it to a million peices, and I
can't pick them all up.

I waited to long to
tell you my true feelings.
I was just so scared. It had me
sick with worry.

I'm just so sorry.
I'm sorry, sorry,
sorry, SORRY!

I gave it all to you!
You threw it all away, and
now I lay here bleeding despair.
Just forgive me! I feel so childish.

I put all my trust in you! You
drowned it mercilessly! I felt so bad, and
you won't listean, I'm hurting so bad.

I'm bleeding despair and guilt, I never
meant to hurt you, but you decided to hurt
me! I just hope you know what you're doing
to me!

I gave it all to you, I just
don't know what to do, I'm here
all alone, there's room inside
for more than one. I gave it
all to you...

Author notes

I've been going through some more suicidal issues with my life, and the guy that liked me, and I liked him, decided he waited to long to wait for me to get some help, and I didnt tell him my true feelings, because I didnt want to drag him through my hell with me.

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  • nobodys-girl
    January 3

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    wow. its hard when your going through pain and you push others away so you dont bring them into into it. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck


  • NeverSayAddiction
    December 27, 2008
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    Nice

    This really reminds me of a situation Ive gone through... I really like this...


  • Silly Rabbit.
    July 3, 2008
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    Wow... This is so painfully beautiful it almost brought tears... I can relate because I'm also going through some tough times with love... All will be as it is meant to in the end.. Hang in there.
    Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.


  • newnoakua
    May 27, 2008

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    This is good, but not exactly what I was looking for. I'll have to think about it for a bit but best of luck in the contest!


  • MrsJones
    April 27, 2008

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    This is an interesting poem, and something a lot of people struggle with in relationships with people. Being on the other end of a relationship with someone who was suicidal is really really hard. I'm glad you decided to wait on this, and if he can't accept it then that is his choice. I hope you have gotten help since then not only for yourself but others around you. You did a great job of expressing yourself in this. A few things need to be corrected, you use 'to' instead of 'too' a couple times but that's it. Thanks for sharing!


  • Naznomarn
    April 27, 2008

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    Mhmm. I think I remember this feeling very well. But it takes time to come through.
    That which does not kill us, only makes us strong!
    Grow stronger from it.


  • Sweet Zephyr
    April 26, 2008
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    good job!

    So I looked on shameless, clicked on this poem, and guess what?, i liked it! the way you write this poem is great but be careful or it might become to cliche (not to say your feelings aren't real) This poem is so vivid and perk up kid if he decided that you waited to long he's not the right guy for you. If he truly loved you he could've waited a lifetime


    • Snow White Queen
      April 26, 2008

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      k, thanks. I guess ur right, but I still love him, and I dont know what to do. I feel like I've let him down by going through these things, I just feel like crying because I dont know what else there is!

      • Sweet Zephyr
        April 26, 2008
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        i don't want to say that you'll ever stop thinking about him but, one thing is for sure, if you take the time to look around you and live life, there will be unexpected people who love you. PS- with a muse like yours, the world is like an open door


  • DeathHawk
    April 26, 2008

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    Beautiful, very emotional.
    Don't worry hun--things get better. I swear!

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