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In Love

When two young people are in love entwined
In holy matrimony,in both body and mind
To be loving and faithful for ever, and prey
Be trusting and truthful in sharing each day
And when troubles rear their ugly head
Stand steadfast together as on the day you were wed
Start every day with a fresh open mind
And make sure Mr.blame is left far behind..

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JUDMC no.4 Love The Most Beautiful Word

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  • offlimits
    September 30, 2008
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    ty for the entry mit is nice goodluck

  • longshot
    September 11, 2008
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    Great job thank you for entering.


  • owlish
    August 25, 2008

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    Good job. Nobody follows the rules anyhow, but I would greatly APPRECIATE if you did, by putting the inspiration/prompt (in other words, the word) in your AN, alone with your screen name. Thank you for your entry.


  • willowprincess
    May 27, 2008
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    beautiful poem, and great advice. bravo mate!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 21, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Alex Hex
    May 6, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwwww !!!!!!! woow !! this is a really sweet poem !!

    i loved it , thank you so much for entering this contest and best wishes ,

    your friend , fan and host ,
    alex hex


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    April 26, 2008

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    Sweet

    Aaaw this is a very sweet poem i loved the ryhme scheme and the succinctness of the poem. Great Job.

    Good Luck in my Contest

    ~Silky


  • ChristieLove
    April 26, 2008
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    Aww, very good poem, I like the rhyme scheme

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