I glance at you
you glance at me
I know you're true
it's easy to see
you catch my tears
you make me smile
you fight my fears
you're worthwhile
a dream can break
as long as I know this
the pain I'll take
I'll wait for my movie kiss
A contest entry
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380 points, ended April 26, 2008, 10 entries
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i LyK iT!!i SiT n WaIt 4My MoVIe KiSs!!ShYt Im StiLL wAiTiN 4Dat KiSS!!WEll I hOpE hE gAv U uR moViE kIss U wAnTeD!!
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I STILL wish we were a movie
nah, never got my movie kiss. I don't know where I stand anymore. I dont know how to describe it. anyway, go check out "once appon a time" I think you'll like it. tell me what you think -
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i DonT nO wEr I sTaNd EiThEr!!He PlAyIn GamEs RitE noW!!sO..iMa JuS hAv 2WaIt N c WaT hAppEnS!!n YeA iMa Go ChEcK dAt OuT rItE...nOw!!LoLz!!
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The meaning is there and your emotions are there for sure, but some little errors. Like the first line makes no sense to me and your I's need to be capital.
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I wish we were a movie
thank you for the advice, I went back and changed it. you can peek again and tell me what you think now
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