Inside my secret garden there is a mirror pond,
The fairies play here, a loving space they are so fond.
Bull frogs croak a soft tune, for them to prance,
High stepping in the moonlight, a fairies dance.
Small faces all aglow, twirling round and round,
So light on their feet, they hardly touch the ground.
Sprinkles of golden fairy dust light their way,
Inside my secret garden where the fairies love to play.
Dragonflies flit around in time to the fairies dance,
Stop by this special place if you ever get the chance.
You'll know you've found it, when you see the fairy ring,
A truly magical place where everyday is spring.
A contest entry
- Contest # 4 VIRTUAL GARDENS (prewrites okay in this one) by .
500 points, ended April 26, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ahhhh... to open your eyes across the bridge where myths become real... dreams are fulfilled in the twinkling of twilight
ans imagination touches the universe
as it only can!
I did enjoy this!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Very captivating
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Reminds me of Midsummers Night Dream : )
good verbs and descriptive words - easy to imagine
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Excellent
My goodness, this is quite a beautiful write you've penned here. The imagery was fantastic. The flow and rhyming were superb. You, also, know the importance of ending a write. That was an excellent last verse. Well done. Very well done, indeed. Billy Rob
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Fantastic!
This is beautiful! I am especially drawn to it because as a little girl I was very fond of faeries, and would type up little stories (and, later on, have dreams of them) about a place only I knew where faeries lived =D Aside from that, I love the imagery in this piece ... I can picture the fairydust, hear the bullfrogs provide the tune, imagine the dragonflies joining the dance. Marvelous job!!
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Great poem
This poem is fantastic. I love how it is about fairies in their own little getaway place. I have always been fond of fairies and I enjoy reading about fairies. Keep up the good work and I would like to see more fairy poems in the future. Continue writing I love it. Thank you for comenting me on one of my poems too. -
This poem is fantastic. I love how it is about fairies in their own little getaway place. I have always been fond of fairies and I enjoy reading about fairies. Keep up the good work and I would like to see more fairy poems in the future. Continue writing I love it. Thank you for comenting me on one of my poems too.
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his is really cool.It reminds me of somthing found in a children's fairy tale book.Keep up the good work!
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A magical vision
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very good
this amde me feel young again Queen...
it felt like a nice warm safe place to be!!
I love it very much
High stepping in the moonlight...what a picture!!
trev x x x -
beautiful .
oh this is darling!
love it.
...although I think you meant 'aglow"
its such a vivid poem, I could picture it in my mind clearly!
trophy is most deserved!
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Thank you for your wonderful comment and thank you for catching the spelling error I appreciate it
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I absolutely this poem. I have a thing for fairies....nice job.
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I could so see myself slipping off into this mgical place.
I got cold chills as i was reading.
My favorite part is the ending "You'll know you've found it, when you see the fairy ring,
A truly magical place where everyday is spring."
Beautiful.
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Congrats
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Once again you capture true fantasy in a world that you make easy to escape to, wow wow, i love it Anna
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veryyyyyyy gooodddddd
nice and flows great!!
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Beautiful
An awesome write and the pic truly is wonderful
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This is wonderful Queen, imagery i got was beautiful. The background is excellent. Love it
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Wonderful poem. I used to tell my nieces and nephews about fairies and fairy dust. I used to pretend I carried a pouch of fairy dust with me. Congrats on winning the Bronze Trophy...Katie
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Nice rhyme and flow in this piece. Congratulations on the Bronze trophy.
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Oh wow every home should have such a place; good for fairies and people. --- Thank you.
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It would be a grand time if every day were spring this poems sounds as though this place is wonderful, would like to visit Thank you very much for the entry and best wishes in the contest
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a good poem, i feel like dancing now, i will give a twirl on lily pads as nature grins and whistles, lots of lovely movemet here
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