When the moon’s full
And flies the Raven
The sea comes full
Sun dies in its haven
Men, Women see the flight
Of Raven, so dark, so dreary,
For when we see, in the night,
The graven image of one so weary
To life we say, so full and taught,
With strife, thus, we give it’s ought
© Jonathan Wikkins April 26, 2008
All Rights Reserved
Author notes
Credit; QuantumSuz
Up to 10 lines, but no more.
A contest entry
- PIF Semi-Quickie 2 by LadyDementia.
900 points, ended April 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an awesome write. Great imagery throughout. I truly enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your trophy.
Kelli
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Mike, you never cease to amaze me with the things you can come up with! This poem matches the picture perfectly! Very nice! Congrats on the HM!
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i love this mikey it almost reminded me of faces are you a fly on the wall dear angel
this is actually gold you did a great job
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This is a wonderful take from the picture, beautifully dark.
♥
whisper
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Nicely done, smooth flow and good rhyme. Love the direction you took this, wonderfully penned. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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a very weary image your words paint without the picture... enhanced not by the picture but complimented by.... A brilliant job well done..... Hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Sigh...yes the 'graven image of one so weary' I can relate to that. Lovely write for the pic
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Many thought within this poem
"The graven image of one so weary "says so much to me
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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tis was really good, i enjoyed this one so much. the way that you wrote it gave way to ones mindto go off into another place well done
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What a wonderful write! You really played this picture well. Good luck in the contest,
xxx Jem
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