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Love (Assignment)

Love, a state of contradiction and such,

a world of deep joy, yet agony too.

Is it enough or could it be too much?

Senses sharper than any orange construe

each time we risk the heart to that thing, love.

'Never again,' we say after each break,

always we do forget that pledge thereof.

The heart worn on the sleeve, sense we forsake.

Without love we are nothing but alone.

Someone to hold brings such contented joy.

Previous hurts a new love does atone,

so open your heart, no need to be coy.

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Word bank: Love, world, be, orange, again

Rhyme:abab

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  • craftyangel43
    April 26, 2008

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    Beautiful Jem Ma'am. We can not survive without love.
    'Never again,' we say after each break, always we do forget that pledge thereof.
    i wonder how many times i have said never again in my life, to turn right around and fall in love again...lol.
    This is an A+ in my book...*smiles*
    crafty


    • Corvus Corone
      April 27, 2008
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      Chuckles think we have all said 'Never again' when love has caused us to feel pain, then when it is beautiful let it all happen again.


  • Ithica silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    A heart full of love knows no boundaries... only the objects of our affections change but not the emotion if we don't let it... I really like your assignment!!!


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    wonderful piece!
    was it for a contest? if so good luck, let me knw if it was!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins


  • The Poetic Angel
    April 26, 2008

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    well done Jems m'Lady

    butiful write and brill use of word bank

    love You

    xxx Your angel xxx

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