I have some balloons and hugs
For this cartoon
A wannabe, “Warner Bros.” thug
He’s a real loon
So let me turn on this ‘radio-bug’
Let him hear this tune:
“Can you feeel it?”
(‘Squeezing on your lunnnngs so tiiiight? O’ darling…’)"
This teen is popped like a ‘zit’
Thinking he’s theatrical
‘Cause he learned to knit
I’ll give him a break
Though he doesn’t deserve it
I hit his “Wonderous Laws” out the park
Because I know how to curve it
Here’s what a swerve is:
I broke where is nerves live
Then pulled out the backbone
And boiled, until it loss its' tone
I’m pinching his verbs
With my overpowering herbs
He has laryngitis
He lost his words
He writes in slurs
He thinks in spurs
But I move in blurs…
Lay down all your laws at the edge
You only have a few
I could push you over the ledge
But I don’t have to
Please accept my offerings of liniment
Take it with my sincere sentiments
If you want, bring your rage…
Enjoy my pages (they come in mint)
Taste this sage
You can’t see me in these “Word War” sprints
I’ll even accept you as my student for a stint
Since you’re sweating me anyway…
I’ll just leave you my INK print…
Author notes
This is a direct-hit on moluv10's character, "The Worderer (#2)": http://allpoetry.com/poem/4165553 in our on-going 'epic' battle ("The THINKER's Word Warz"). Standard DISCLAIMER: We are only kidding with each other. We are co-collaborators and do this for mental exercises.
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The title got me interested in this...I remember snagglepuss always saying "exit, stage left." You just don't hear those words anymore and most people don't know where they came from.
Honestly I have no idea what your poem is about, sorry...so no comment here. I feel so out of touch reading this?? ...alby
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LOL...you're right (top comment); not prob. about not going furhter with the commenting -my skin can take it. I write with 3 of my brothers here (to a series called, "The THINKER's Word Warz" - has ref. info in the author notes for the informed and the 'uninitiated'...lol. Just for kicks; with lots of urban lingo...if ever interested, please don't hesitate to IM me...thanks for coming. I'm at your site now.
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Ten Stars
Like a good place to go.
The ratings are high.(five star...)
and the reasons why.
My verdict is in "you have been placed in the top ten".
Ps! you bro's are hot.
you guys keep hit-n- each other up right on the spot.
NOW DON'T CRACK ON ME BECAUSE, TOUGH SKIN I'M NOT lol. -
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Thank you very much ma'lady...I see you are bubbling over with good taste and style. Good eyes to recognize, huh? lol...I'll take the stars and add it to my growing collection from those other 'guys' I de-throned...lol.
"The Page Inker"
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ok, ok, i see what the deal is....lol well, the worderer will stop sweating you...lol
(by the way, moluv thought this was hillarious!)
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lol...yeah, but not all arch enemies fill (hahaha) like you do Mr. Worderer...lol. (BEEP...you have no more minutes left on this card...BONK! BONK! BONK!)...Darn it! Dog-gone cheap pre-paid cards!!!
"The Page Inker"...
[Psst! Mo, this is AsIThink: Your piece was hilarious too...this dude is 'tripp'in! lol]
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l.o.l.!
uh oh looks like Mo's worderer #2 is being protected by'unseen forces!' l.o.l. 'staged finker' I'd tread lightly if n I was u! l.o.l.!
signed your pal, P.Pen
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["MESSAGE W14...Welcome to "The Page Inker's" automated messaging system...that smile won't be on your face long...Beep...Beep...processing; voice analyzing complete...that smile won't be on your face long "Pig Pen"...BEEEP...! Message Terminated... Thank You]
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weak at best...cute tune however
Good luck in your endeavor to face the fires
of your yearning desires with the power of MOLUV10.
Standard Disclaimer: if you CAN'T stand the heat, then perhaps
you should learn how to bake cookee's for us as treats"
much love and kisses,
ears/Seattle sis to MoLuv10.
smoooooooooch
(with kind jive and respect given)
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["MESSAGE W14...Welcome to "The Page Inker's" automated messaging system...that smile won't be on your face long...Beep...Beep...processing; voice analyzing complete...that smile won't be on your face long "ears/Seattle sis"...BEEEP...! Message Terminated... Thank You]
(Just kidding; kindness being reciprocated -- AsIThink).
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