Lust filled.
Hardness delving, finding its bonding.
Sweet sultry honeys flowing as you fill me
neatly, take me completely.
Tempt me into euphoric screams
while leaving gentle marks on neck,
and tongue teasing ablaze trails down
to wanton breast.
Innermost muscles alive I writhe and pant,
scratch my joy on naked flesh. A spell
cast upon me as control you lustfully take.
Senses scream salvation as bodies shudder
orgasm, the glint in your eyes tells me
our endeavour is complete.
In a list
A contest entry
- Sexy*Sexy Writes by Poetic Butterfly.
600 points, ended May 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Classic Climax by zochit2me.
700 points, ended May 3, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow very hot and erotic, I love it...your imagery and descriptions are perfect and I love the flow and style of this poem. Very good.
-Garrett
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Beautifully Penned
This was HOT Cuz, and yet, it wasn't "filthy whore erotica", but it had an elegance to it.
You gave such wonderful imagery to the reader by your terrific word usage.
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I got a couple of the filthy erotica kind lol..but i definitely prefer to be more loving and sensual about it..true love and love making is about sensuality
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Wow are you single?
. The poem is very good
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heh..no im not sorry..Very lucky bene with my man for nearly four years
thanks for the read, much appreciated
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Deep
scratch my joy on naked flesh
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Beautifully Crafted
I was immediately drawn in with the erotic imagery that was very tastefully projected. You seem to write from experience, don't answer, leave it to the imagination....nice!
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Very sensual and erotic. Sounds like you had inspiration to write this hot steamy one
Great job on the prompt.
Becky
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I did, thank you
Cindy
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Sexy hott "Sweet sultry honeys flowing as you fill me neatly, take me completely." Love it!
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hehehe I loved writing it
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WOW STEAMY
What an excellent poem on sensual with erotic imagery. I really loved this one. I'm a bit speechless myself. You are very good at this you know. Thats so healthy that you are in touch with this part of who you are. Thank you sweetie for sharing your gift with me to write fabulous poetry!!!
Much Love
Aunty Kelle
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Thanks Aunty Kelle..>Erotica has pratically always been a fav genre of mine...Love first then erotica hehehe
Cin
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Wow is this HOT!! Damn, Cindy! I don't know what to say...I'm speechless I need my b/f lol! Great write hon
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I needed my man after writing too...and enjoyed it tooooo lol
Thanks Darl....I loved getting out an erotic write has been a while
Cin -
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I know what you mean!! I enjoy writing an occasional naughty piece of poetry
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Very, very well done, Cindy. Another hot write, indeed. I am glad you've had a good weekend and glad it inspired such an enjoyable poem. Definitely very strong an creating the feeling and image in a nice blend... good work!
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Thanks Mark...I am just glad I wrote another erotic.sensual write..has been a while
Cin
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Oh my my my.... sis, this is so HOTTTTT
You're sensual/erotic writes are just the best... this is fantastic and left me longing...
Excellent work! PHEW hehe
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Yeah well it's been a while...All the pent up frustrations of not writing erotic so often..spilled out last night hehehehe
But I am in no way complaining it feels good to write a stand-out ( well to me, lol ) erotic piece again
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I sure have missed them sis
Keep 'em coming...
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Well I know how your weekend went!
I swear I peeked! 
Love, C
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Hehehe it was great having real love inspire such exciting words..specially when I havent written a decent erotic for ages.
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lol your 'no comment' says it all!
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Very hot and sensual as well! I enjoyed this...best of luck Hun!
Az
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Thanks Darl, Much appreciated
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Deeply sensual pulling one swiftly into the erotic imagery of this piece. It is like its being whispered into ones ear by a soft yet firm voice. This is a great piece! Think i better baby oil the bubble wrap
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Thanks darl..hope u had fun with the baby oil
lol
Cin
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A most sensual penning told in a tasteful manner dear, lovely, and best of luck in the contest.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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IJ glad u still think it's tatseful, I was worried.
Thanks Dad
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yes ...this is classic---climax...so much open and so much closed ..well crafted poetry is here..I love it..well done...
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Thank you, my friend
Cindy
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