fast fall fluffy flakes
spring late arriving
whiteout blinds pathway
Author notes
modern haiku
All was dry, but brown. Now, after a week of nothing but snow, over a foot of it falling, all is white again
Please tell me what you think
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a sorry robbin in the yard
seems to be begging for bread
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Good solid imagery, but bad, bad weather! Good observational piece. Well done
Dennis
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I love the alliteration of the first line... Very beautiful! You still have snow! Aw. Man! Hehe... Spring is awesome
Nice Haiku!
and best of luck in your contest
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nice image, sudden snowfall.
tanka:
colour changed so suddenly
birds aren't sure where the ground is -
waiting for the icicles
to melt into a mud bog -
You must be Canadian?... Where else would the weather be so rude. lol. Yucky in a good way...
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you poor woman...are you still getting snow?...caught the image and I also felt the chill...hows ya girl...
love the image
Mal
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This first line is almost a tongue twister. I really enjoyed this haiku. Good luck in the contest. A very well written piece.
Kelli -
I thought I read something similiar to this but guess not. Snow is such a burden. Good ludck to you in the contest.
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