Beautiful rose buds
Pervading the air with their scent
Pretty... 'till I sneeze
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Haiku
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A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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my nose becomes a rosebud
pink and ready to burst out!
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Oh... I love the last line! Very nice twist... Though, I'm not sure that roses have that much of an odor unless you are referring to the other flowers...
Nicely done!
Best of luck in your contest
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love it
great ku. love it.
tanka: allergies take hold of drips
suddenly showering down -
oh yes, the sneezes! lovely image.
tanka:
paper roses look as good
and their scent won't make me sneeze
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Summertime brings us lovely roses. However, they can very well cause our allergies to act up. A good haiku in my opinion.
Kelli -
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Thank you for your comment. :]
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Ha ha! love this! i am sniffling right now..all stuffed up and such...
anyway, I LOVE this haiku...i think i am going to make my next contest a haiku one.
Great Job!
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lol I hate allergy season. And my job requires my constant being outside! >.< I always come home having an allergy attack haha.
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