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Highly Contagious

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I spied you crying,
you saw me laughing;
I started to cry
you began to laugh.
Seems both are contagious.

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prompt: cry
picture from deviantART

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  • Keystone Theater
    April 26, 2008

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    I certainly know laughing is contagious! Not surprised it crying is even more so because empathy would lead us to feel the sorrow of the one crying. The good thing is, laughter usually stops the crying...at least for a while.

    Thanks for entering my contest.


  • Lady Altheia
    April 26, 2008

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    I like the picture. Both are contagious. It just goes to show what goes around comes around. Good luck in the contest.

  • carole21
    April 26, 2008

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    cute

    cute short write for the prompt . . liked "I spied you crying" and "Seems both are contagious" . . good luck in the contest . .


  • PoetrysAngel2041
    April 26, 2008

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    nice piece. Very true message. If only laughter could be more contagious than tears the world would be a better place. Excellent message.