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settled



patterns of disappointment
erupt

disrupting expectations of
sex
of chocolate

you've screwed up
dearly, now

you've
fucked the dog

and dropped it


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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    LOL... sex, chocolate, dogs, and shit... a great combination!
    I think the title is very fitting for this piece - and I loved your opening line.
    I hope to see more from you soon!