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Yesterday's Hero

Missing image
on film he was the hero
a chap with mettle,
thrust of lance
pennant flying in his hand
riding steeds to rescue the lass

the silver screen disappeared
leaving a gnarled old man,
alone in his bed chamber
counting time on life's abacus

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10/10/20 Word Bank: film,chap,mettle,thrust,lance,pennant,lass,screen,gnarly,chamber,abacus {I used 11 words}

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  • Gypsie Ink
    April 28, 2008

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    Aaaww...

    A wonderful and sad write...I really like this piece.

    Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in the contest.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 26, 2008

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    Oh this makes me think of Errol Flynn or Cary Grant lol but the latter wouldn't be alone in his chamber!!! lol. Nice write. Love, C