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[ The love you give me ]

The love you give me
It's a kind of love that me going for hours
helps fade the worrys and fears inside my head
helps me sleep on the could, dark nights on my bed

"I'll know I'll be ok.."
"Though my sky's are turning gray"

and you keep pulling me closer and closer to you
and I wont let little things keep me from being next to you
to hear you voice and see a smile on your face

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  • judy011
    May 2, 2008
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    wow pretty amazing poem


  • VerminVomit
    April 26, 2008

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    :)

    i like the 2nd stanza the most...
    i think the background should be a differet color though
    well, this is your best write so far