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nature display nude
thoughts undressed
mind prism unclogged
sense waves deflected
measureless depths seen

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 27, 2008
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    Truly intriguing and grasping... x


  • Kiddy
    April 26, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the prompt, Ji... I loved line 4 very much...
    all the best in the contest...

    Love
    - Your virtual daughter

  • Kiddy
    April 26, 2008
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    Wonderful take on the prompt, Ji... I loved line 4 very much...
    all the best in the contest...

    Love
    - Your virtual daughter


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    awww, this is a great write for the contest, wonderful job and good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • Topaze
    April 26, 2008
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    A nicely written piece, my best wishes in the contest.

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