Staring deep into your eyes,
I feel flutters deep inside.
Not the average butterflies,
and there's something I must confide...
There is no other, than you,
my lover.
There is not another soul
that I ever want to hold -
To feel your heart beatwith mine
brings a contentment so sublime...
Your kisses soft and luxurious,
your hands soft and gently curious,
Your mouth so luscious, delicious, and I
can't help but devour them both lip and eye...
you deep voice sends shivers,
your sweet, smooth caress -
the lust comes in rivers,
and you are the best...
You are the only one residing,
in my heart...
the only person who I dream of,
and the funnest ride I've been on -
finest body I've had the luck to see,
I wish I had more to offer than just me...
You know me better than any other,
you enjoy being with my mother -
you're loving, caring, good to me;
we've all our own opinion, si -
my precious prince, my future man...
the only one offered my hand...
tequiero, mi amore...
Author notes
This is sort of a song, which makes it worse lmao... eheh and you asked for mushy...
Devoted to my gorgeous Lucious and yeah I'd have warned you about the secksual references but I think you said not to coz then you couldn't read it... ^.^ Hope it's not too long just wentwith it...
~TheSilverQuill
Enjoi
A contest entry
- Love and Romance by ForeverLastingComa.
450 points, ended April 28, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Positive and Critique feedback most appreciated...
Comments
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Wow this poem is amazing, I just love mushy poems when am in the mood for it, my favorite lines were,
"Your kisses soft and luxurious,
your hands soft and gently curious,
Your mouth so luscious, delicious, and I
can't help but devour them both lip and eye...
you deep voice sends shivers,
your sweet, smooth caress -
the lust comes in rivers,
and you are the best..."
I enjoyed reading this lots..thank you for entering and Good Luck =D
~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~
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this is deff. a mushy poem.lol...but i loved it this was real love. the flow was great here too check my poems out x
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