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Enveloped are Souls

Missing image

painted by Vladimir Kush
 

 

 

 

 

As if time stood still

elaborate chimes for scenario,

are there for souls to cherish.

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 27, 2008
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    beautifully penned... x


  • Amera gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    Beautiful work! In a short verse you have summated reflected love in the motion of time thus depicting the picture provided perfectly. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Kiddy
    April 26, 2008
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    Very good write, Titus... good choice of words too..
    all the best in the contest...

    Love
    -Kiddy


  • Kiddy
    April 26, 2008
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    Very good write, Titus... good choice of words too..
    all the best in the contest...

    Love
    -Kiddy


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    awww this is lovely, great write and good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • Topaze
    April 26, 2008
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    Very nicely written. My best wishes in the contest.

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