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Stimulation

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You wake me every morning
   with a kiss upon my lips,
you warm me as I hold you
   stimulating finger tips.

Your aroma wakes my senses
   any hour of any day,
the pleasure of your company
   as I work or rest or play.

To see you hot and steamy
   a delight before my eyes,
feel you tingle on my tongue,
   your sweetness a surprise.

You fill my every longing
   as I drain your final drop,
put down the empty coffee cup,
   a shame you have to stop.
 
 
 

 

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 1, 2008

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    Hot and steamy..I agree. Coffee can do wonders that sometimes sex cannot. I love both but adore a hot cup of coffee in the morning


  • quantumsurveyor
    May 12, 2008

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    The poem beautifully reflects the alluring cup of coffee - can just see and feel that froth slowly revolving as I savour the taste, the feel, the sensuous - Wow. Too early in the morning!! A cracking double-edged poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • piccola silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    I absolutely love this. I am always moved by my morning coffee and a cup early in the evening too! ummm ummm. Nice job, thank you for entering.


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 28, 2008

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    Power to the coffee bean-or was it a coffee bean?????
    Love Hilly


  • Lily of the Valley
    April 27, 2008

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    There could be no better way to arouse the senses and greet the morning than with something this hot, steamy and tasteful. There are some smells, tastes and sensations that cannot be surpassed by anything else. Good luck in the contest


  • Roaddog Wolf
    April 26, 2008

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    i THOUGHT THIS WAS A VERY WELL

    structured poem, good rhyme pattern and it flowed well but it was a clever poem in it's content and done with a simple subject, I enjoyed the read good write


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    Ahhh Coffee

    I dont know what i would do about coffee but I have to say this is the first time that I have ever read a poem like this about coffee.

    I dont even know why i even think I'll ever find something off with your poems but the rhythm and rhyme are flawless. i loved it. Another great one.

  • Rudolf
    April 26, 2008

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    nothing like a hot beverage to wake you up

    though it was a coffee, I could'nt help but think
    if this was your lover, then passion was the drink
    so off to work i'm going, but first I filled my mind
    with lemon and some honey, quenched a thirsty find...
    rudolf


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 26, 2008

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    You make drinking coffee sound so sensualy hot. Hahahha. Brilliant words here Sue. I love the rhyme too they flow, like the coffee must do in your home. Hehehehe. Well done for this. Good luck in the competion.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • EeyoreUK
    April 26, 2008

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    I like this, so sensual, Good luck in the contest, though with a write like this I dont think you need much help.


  • arafura gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    Nothing like a good cup of coffee to get you up and going...! Good luck in the contest!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    I have a distinct impression you only thought of coffee in that final line...

    Good writing and I hope you get well stimulated

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