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Particles of time

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As we form actions from particles of time trying to erase the agony of yearning, we erase as well how it felt to be alive...

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  • liveddog gold member
    May 22

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    Hi G.b.d.
    You define in a most profound way what it is to be human!! We are continually experiencing:

    "...THE AGONY OF YEARNING...."

    I accept that this is my capitalisation and not yours G.b.d. I capitalise these words because of the importance I am putting on them.

    Isn't this the story of Adam and Eve? Don't Buddists say that that desire is the source of all suffering? Did not Charles Darwin show this "yearning" in his Theory of Evolution? Surely Sigmund Freud believed that we all are sujected throughout our lives to this "discontent?" And did not Jean Paul Sartre say: "we are condemned to freedom?"

    I believe religions and state ideologies were created to deal with this intrapersonal and interpersonal "...agony of yearning."

    You sum up in one line the essence of being human and what it means to be alive!!!!!!!!!!
    Perfect picture!
    Good wishes,
    Liveddog.


  • blueyez
    August 15, 2008

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    I love the way your mind sees these things!
    peace and Love


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 22, 2008
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    This is very well written, congratulations on your trophy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 27, 2008
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    Truly meaningful and grasping... x


  • ennovy silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    Magnificent Quote

    The words, the picture all fit like a hand in a glove.
    Perfections in truth....You my friend have spoken golden words. Thank you for sharing this deep thought.....novy


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    awww wow, i really like this, its very strong, great write, and good luck
    take crae
    stephanie


  • Topaze
    April 26, 2008
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    Very well written, my best wishes in the contest.

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