As we form actions from particles of time trying to erase the agony of yearning, we erase as well how it felt to be alive...
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 6 ~ Stopped Moment by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended April 27, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the way your mind sees these things!

peace and Love

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This is very well written, congratulations on your trophy


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Truly meaningful and grasping... x
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Magnificent Quote
The words, the picture all fit like a hand in a glove.
Perfections in truth....You my friend have spoken golden words. Thank you for sharing this deep thought.....
novy


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awww wow, i really like this, its very strong, great write, and good luck
take crae
stephanie
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Very well written, my best wishes in the contest.


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