Time never stopped
but once,
when in awe
everyone forgot,
purpose
and remembered
their hearts.
Author notes
15 amazing words
Prompt ~ The picture above
painted by Vladimir Kush
A contest entry
- Surreal Illusion # 6 ~ Stopped Moment by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended April 27, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a sincere and attention grabbing write... x
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my favourite in this competition.
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Amazing write
You truly have said it all here for often we in the rush of the day find ourself when asked to do something we ask why when what we should do is search our hearts and say when and help one another
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everyone forgot,
purpose
and remembered
their hearts.
Moms right Steph...this is truly inspired stuff. I am so proud of you.
Dad
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nice
lovely write for the prompt . . liked "Time never stopped but once" and "and remembered their hearts" . . good luck in the contest . .
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And this is the way it should always be...the hearts sometimes get forgotten caught up inside the day's activities. Beautiful job.
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oooh this is beautiful. I love this one so much. especially the last 4 lines. this is what should happen more often. too much pain in life, there should be more happiness, love..
excellent job with the prompt.
good luck
mommy [kat]
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Great write... Time stops me from moving from this page for a minute and I was like 'would I ever write like this?' - Good job there.
All the best
love
-Kiddy -
Very nicely written, all my best wishes in the contest.
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