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allnighters


lumination

saturn lights hang chained
swung from a ceiling grid ex-
tending toward the dark


meditation

coffee drop by drip
wakes at the edge of midnight
small black pools of thought


contemplation

picture panes reflect
trays floating amid the void
headlamps in the night


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  • carmen
    May 19

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    I am someone who loves the day as much as I appreciate the night, but indeed the night has some beautiful gifts of its own. In very few words, you have brilliantly presented them here. I love how you weaved all three of them, but I can most relate with meditation being a coffee lover. I do have moments of contemplation but they are mostly amid the void of a boobtube, besides I don't drive. Saturn lights are nice, as well as the moon and stars and meteors glowing in the dark skies, but I need the sun.

    Nevertheless, these three vignettes are wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    April 26
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    coffee - small black pools of thought!!
    A wonderful picture.
    The rest are almost as good too.