lumination
saturn lights hang chained
swung from a ceiling grid ex-
tending toward the dark
meditation
coffee drop by drip
wakes at the edge of midnight
small black pools of thought
contemplation
picture panes reflect
trays floating amid the void
headlamps in the night
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Thoughts, Feelings, Interpretations, Experience:
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How about death?, can you do one or do you have one on death
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haiku? Nooo. Too short a form to write "about" death. But I have poems on the topic in other forms. What sort of focus in regards to death?
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these three vignettes are wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!


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coffee - small black pools of thought!!
A wonderful picture.
The rest are almost as good too.





