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allnighters


lumination

saturn lights hang chained
swung from a ceiling grid ex-
tending toward the dark


meditation

coffee drop by drip
wakes at the edge of midnight
small black pools of thought


contemplation

picture panes reflect
trays floating amid the void
headlamps in the night


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  • Ilidzs
    August 14, 2008
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    How about death?, can you do one or do you have one on death


    • Zahhar gold member
      August 18, 2008
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      haiku? Nooo. Too short a form to write "about" death. But I have poems on the topic in other forms. What sort of focus in regards to death?


  • carmen
    May 19, 2008

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    these three vignettes are wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!


  • I-Like-Rhymes silver member
    April 26, 2008
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    coffee - small black pools of thought!!
    A wonderful picture.
    The rest are almost as good too.