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Drought

The heat is scorching
Although summer is long gone
When will this drought end?

A contest entry

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  • DogFish silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    oppressive!

    the merciless tyranny
    of a land that lost its soul




  • obscenegesture
    May 6, 2008
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    very fitting haiku,

    tanka:

    tongues turned to leather
    blather about the weather


  • Perception
    May 4, 2008

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    Hm... Fire filled... Drought... yikes.
    I like this haiku though... Wonderful job!
    Best of luck in your contest
    Great write


  • Supa Fox
    April 28, 2008

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    grass wilts, holidays draw near
    will this winter be snow-less?


    I like that you took an element of one season and put it with another ^.^ A unique idea.


  • just mercedes gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    very hot haiku

    tanka:

    leaves are falling on the roof
    making sounds like dry showers


  • Kelli Marie
    April 26, 2008

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    Very nicely done. I am guessing fall has come, but summer doesn't want to let go. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli

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