When i'm with my friends I wonder
If we are truly friends
The way to find is to check our zodiac signs
I find out that Libra matches with Capricorn
Now I Know we are truely friends
I also noticed that we don't have to check our zodiac signs
To no if we are truly friends
All i have to do is to show our friendship
And now that makes us true friends
A contest entry
- Zodiac Signs - Astrological Influence by eleni.
450 points, ended May 9, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good job
First of all Andreas you need to either choose a lighter color for the words to the poem or choose a lighter colored background in order for it to be seen. Other than that I enjoyed this poem. However please remember that it doesn't matter what zodiac signs we have or anything else that makes people friends. What makes a friend is having and showing love and respect for one another. Being able to spend time together and help each other. When you meet people, some you're gonna like, some you're not. But it should never have anything to do with what their zodiac sign is, what color their skin is, what country they're from, language they speak, religion they practice or anything. It's the love in your heart that counts.
Good luck in the contest, buddy.
Brian -
Short and precise
I like the meaning of the poem, however I would have liked a bit more information as to why Libra and Capricorn are true friends. The friendship theme is great, and I like the ending of the poem, although I think the poem could be a bit longer to generate a more climatic feeling at the end. Thanks for entering my first contest and good luck!
P.S. Could you please change the colour of the writing? I had a bit of trouble highlighting the poem to see what it said! -
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I added a bit more to my poem i hope you like it.
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